Yes. Yes, now see - this is why you stun me. You've got this great plot, you've got these awesome characterizations... then you throw in these details that sell it all like whoa.
The streets are overrun with people, looters, broken glass and their first thought is that demons have taken over.
And after writing such an awesome Dean perspective you've switched smoothly into writing just as awesome a Sam perspective.
Of course, I will never forgive you for killing Dean... >:(
He doesn’t burn the body because right now, the thought of Dean coming back is the only thing that’s holding him together.
But Sam is angsting enough for the both of us in this, so maybe I'll get past it ;)
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14/2/07 06:58 (UTC)The streets are overrun with people, looters, broken glass and their first thought is that demons have taken over.
And after writing such an awesome Dean perspective you've switched smoothly into writing just as awesome a Sam perspective.
Of course, I will never forgive you for killing Dean... >:(
He doesn’t burn the body because right now, the thought of Dean coming back is the only thing that’s holding him together.
But Sam is angsting enough for the both of us in this, so maybe I'll get past it ;)