I really like the AU you've constructed here. Grace is a fascinating character (and how thrilled am I to see somebody doing something with that particular lose end?). Tobias's low self-esteem comes across really well without being too heavy-handed -- that his reaction to Rachel suggesting hanging out (to prevent him from joining the Sharing) is to assume that she's a Yeerk reads as very true.
And I kind of cheered when he threw the punch.
Like I said, a really great start, and I look forward to seeing where you go with this! ♥
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I really like the AU you've constructed here. Grace is a fascinating character (and how thrilled am I to see somebody doing something with that particular lose end?). Tobias's low self-esteem comes across really well without being too heavy-handed -- that his reaction to Rachel suggesting hanging out (to prevent him from joining the Sharing) is to assume that she's a Yeerk reads as very true.
And I kind of cheered when he threw the punch.
Like I said, a really great start, and I look forward to seeing where you go with this! ♥