Here's some stuff... I hope you're having a good holiday.
but the after way the younger Winchester’s voice cracked when he said, (but after THE way the) move the 'the' in front of 'after' to ... after 'after'.
“I love a man who love his pie.” (love a man who loveS his pie)
that's all... unless the Hell Hound is either plural or singular, you may want to put an 'a' before it or 's' at the end of hound. That way it's not "mauled by hell hound".
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but the after way the younger Winchester’s voice cracked when he said, (but after THE way the) move the 'the' in front of 'after' to ... after 'after'.
“I love a man who love his pie.” (love a man who loveS his pie)
that's all... unless the Hell Hound is either plural or singular, you may want to put an 'a' before it or 's' at the end of hound. That way it's not "mauled by hell hound".
Again, great fic. Loved it.