ext_44725 ([identity profile] scornedsaint.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] last01standing 2006-09-18 01:25 am (UTC)

First, some critiques from Your Official Beta (of crackfic, but still. I assume jurisdiction in all cases)

most people speculate that Eyes Only probably meet(should be met) a brutal end

Should have kept out of other’s(others') business

Cale’s touch against her neck,

Doesn't she normally call him Logan? It's been awhile since I've seen the show, so I could be wrong on that one.

As for the fic itself: innnnteresting. I'm not entirely sure where you're going with this, but I can't wait until you post again.

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