Man, that's a great start to a great story.

“No, it’s way possible.” Cordelia folded her arms. “Mistakes happen all the time. Just look at Doyle.”

“Hey!”

*chuckles*

Your Cordelia is dead-on character. With the tactlessness and all what makes her so refreshing. I loved it.

Your Doyle too, come to think of it. :)

Only thing that has been bothering me is the lack of interrogation points. ?. I mean, it's just one tiny detail, but I'm picky like that. XD

Anyways, off to read next chapter.